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Post by Nifster on Sat Jan 02, 2010 10:06 am



12% size of original. I have yet to color it fully. CnC welcome before I go any further.

I stole his glasses:


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Post by Sparkles on Sat Jan 02, 2010 11:11 pm

I don't like the man thong thing he has going on, nor do I enjoy the fact that every time I glance at his crotch I feel like he has an oddly shaped bulge. The mouth also looks a little bit weird, but I'm sure that's just because everything was scaled down so much. I do like it, though. The monkey's facial expression is pricelessly cute.

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Post by Nifster on Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:32 am

Oh ok. It's called the iliac crest.

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Post by Sparkles on Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:56 am

I know, but I'm half blind and it looked like a thong before I figured that out. I think it would look better if it was a lot more subtle. Right now I feel it stands out too much.

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Post by Nifster on Sun Jan 03, 2010 6:26 am

You have very keen eyes and I thank you for that. <3

I will erase away some of the lines when I start to color it. <:

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Post by MehgoMeh on Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:40 pm

Hm, only thing I see is that the pelvic bone is a bit elongated. It seems as though his pants are baggy, yet they're really tight too.

Other than that, you're illustrative style is nice, I like it alot.
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Post by Silk on Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:46 pm

I think a little weight/shadow on the monkey's legs(or where ever that's in contact with the guy). It looks like it's pasted on the guy on first glance, some emphasis in that area would help.
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Post by ync on Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:54 pm

considering i know this is your style, i'm not really going to point out the things that are "wrong" because they might not be wrong to you, they might be exactly how you wanted it to be done - if clamp can make wonky bodies (not saying you do) then you can do whatever the hell you want

i love your style, it's really fresh and it's something different. and i've always loved how you do hair, the tips are always so smooth and soft
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